Hail Mary

Hail Mary
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=51JC2F-FfZ4

The day the world stood still…

If my pen was a paintbrush, I’d paint a picture to see.
A story in time; when da walls closed n on me.
It was the day the world stood still, innocence lost, and tragedy fill
A day of ending and new beginning –
Witnessed a war: righteousness vs. sinning.
The day started as one of pride,
I couldn’t imagine the secrets the night would hide.
I couldn’t imagine the faith I would come to learn,
Or the realities brought forth of souls doomed to burn.

Don’t know the alpha or the omega, neither was in sight,
but I do know the harsh reality of my bliss that night.
Perhaps I'll never know why I was the only one in the room…
And perhaps I’ll never stop wondering if ultimately it'd be my doom.
Felt like an eternity standing toe to toe,
All the while --- thinking to myself friend or foe?
I looked at him and he looked back at me it seemed it was forever, paralyzed an eternity.
But it wasn't the eyes of my enemy,
More like a familiar stare I became aware that was long lost to me.
But yes, the eyes were cold, they were dark, and they were piercing me,
What courage it took for the angel who ran upstairs to rescue me,
at that moment I realized a hero is way more than anything I could ever hope to be.


I flew down the stairs, passed the quiet guard,
jumped over the porch landed on my feet into the yard,
And there I stood as if I was in this world alone,
and I wasn’t snapped back until to the ground I was thrown.

I think I was in awe, cause I realized the ramifications of what I just saw.
“For by thee I have run through a troop; and by God have leaped over a wall”
Literally!
For this is the night I believe the angels carried me –
The halos and horns I could see so vividly
That is why I believe in my heart a martyr fell before we.

Be still fear in our enemies with ignorance their disguise
Behold the angels with the tears in their eyes.
In that moment we all came to be one – there was no divisible sides,
Together we stood and for a second coexistence won.
There together to witness and mourn the wrong that has been done.
And that is the true meaning of loss when you all wanna talk about “lost one.”

And to he, at his last breath I think he took me too,
And left a lasting impression too real and too true.
For I felt the weight lifted when a spirit was called home and I knew it was accepted,
Not left here to roam.
It wasn’t at that moment I felt restored to reality
But the world stood still did not move again until I felt that first snowflake touch me.
Now, hail Mary

Do you have a recorded audio version?

really because i cant read this the way you would rap it

I can get one... can you give me a few weeks?

@Networth you wanna try to change this to an audio? If you're bored one day and you can change any line to make it fit. It's just a concept. I'm just trying to see if how I write is for people who flow or more just like poetry w a beat.
@Daz or a few years.

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Nah it's mine, they put Da instead of the and changed a word to Bliss. Sorry bitch watching your classmate get gunned down and a party shot up and then watching him die in my lap in the car at the ER isn't bliss. I can see how for you it would be though. Why hide? Why lie? Why try to defamate me? Who ever you are and what ever screen name you hide behind now.

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@ILLunatic maybe - he would probably have to change a lot though

If my.. pen was a paintbrush, I’d paint a picture to see. [:31]
A... story in time; when da walls closed n on me.
I re..member the day the world stood still,
it was,, innocence lost, and tragedy filled
A day of ending and new beginning –
when I Witnessed a war of righteousness vs. sinning.
What a end, when we started the day as one of pride
Couldn’t imagine all of the secrets the night would hide.
Couldn’t imagine all of the faith I'd come to learn,
Or the realities brought forth.. of all these souls doomed to burn.

Dont know the Alpha or the Omega, niether in sight [1:00]
But I know the Harsh reality of all I would see that night
Perhaps I'll never know.. why I was alone in that room
Maybe I'll never stop wonderin on ultimately be my doom
But it felt..like.. an enternity standin toe to toe
All the while my thought was just friend foe.
We exchanged looks seemingly forever paralizin my energy
These eyes lookin back at me's not the ones of my enemy

But i became aware.. 1:24]
That these cold dark eyes piercin me had long their familiar stare
What courage it took the anngel to run up the steps and rescue me
That moment I realized a Hero is more than I'd ever be
Oh the courage it took her to come and rescue me
The moment I realized a Hero is more than I'd ever be

Then I flew down the stairs, and passed the quiet guard, [1:42]
jumped over the porch landed on my feet into the yard,
And it was there that I stood as if in this world alone,
and then I snapped back onto the ground to which I was thrown.

I was in awe... ramificattions of what I saw
“For by thee I've run through a troop; by God leaped over a wall”
Wit halos and horns, we the angels carried
Do I much bleieve a martyr fell for me? Very!
Wit halos and horns, we the angels carried
Do I much bleieve a martyr fell for me? Very!

Be still fear in our enemies ignorance they disguise [2:11]
Coexistence is won, no divisible sides
We came together as one to mourn the wrong that was done
If u behold the angels you can see the tears in they eyes
You lost ones..but real loss true
lasting impression on his last breath he took mine too

Felt that..weight lifted spirit was called home
I knew it was accepted, no where left to roam
Reality restored and your memories never buried
Rest in piece this winter, you winner and Hail Mary!

OMG that was so amazing but I liked it better on the parts you tweaked and made your own. THANK YOU!!!! I really do appreciate. You're quick too - I bet you perfect it some more it'd be beyond straight fire. @Networth you're good as fuck - hope you one of the ones that make it.

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and btw... Live Free Chris Hollins 2-4-95, thank you for always watching over me.

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I heard you tonite Chris, I heard them playing Candy Rain.

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Don't let them do me like this no more.

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Link one: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...Just-Some-Brag

If my.. pen was a paintbrush, I’d paint a picture to see. [:31]
A... story in time; when da walls closed n on me.
I re..member the day the world stood still,
it was,, innocence lost, and tragedy filled
A day of ending and new beginning –
when I Witnessed a war of righteousness vs. sinning.
What a end, when we started the day as one of pride
Couldn’t imagine all of the secrets the night would hide.
Couldn’t imagine all of the faith I'd come to learn,
Or the realities brought forth.. of all these souls doomed to burn.

Dont know the Alpha or the Omega, niether in sight [1:00]
But I know the Harsh reality of all I would see that night
Perhaps I'll never know.. why I was alone in that room
Maybe I'll never stop wonderin on ultimately be my doom
But it felt..like.. an enternity standin toe to toe
All the while my thought was just friend foe.
We exchanged looks seemingly forever paralizin my energy
These eyes lookin back at me's not the ones of my enemy

But i became aware.. 1:24]
That these cold dark eyes piercin me had long their familiar stare
What courage it took the anngel to run up the steps and rescue me
That moment I realized a Hero is more than I'd ever be
Oh the courage it took her to come and rescue me
The moment I realized a Hero is more than I'd ever be

Then I flew down the stairs, and passed the quiet guard, [1:42]
jumped over the porch landed on my feet into the yard,
And it was there that I stood as if in this world alone,
and then I snapped back onto the ground to which I was thrown.

I was in awe... ramificattions of what I saw
“For by thee I've run through a troop; by God leaped over a wall”
Wit halos and horns, we the angels carried
Do I much bleieve a martyr fell for me? Very!
Wit halos and horns, we the angels carried
Do I much bleieve a martyr fell for me? Very!

Be still fear in our enemies ignorance they disguise [2:11]
Coexistence is won, no divisible sides
We came together as one to mourn the wrong that was done
If u behold the angels you can see the tears in they eyes
You lost ones..but real loss true
lasting impression on his last breath he took mine too

Felt that..weight lifted spirit was called home
I knew it was accepted, no where left to roam
Reality restored and your memories never buried
Rest in piece this winter, you winner and Hail Mary!

I wouldn't want to think he fell for me... I just met him and he had a baby on the way. It was horrible.

Sorry the tape/song wasn't horrible, him dying... the recording was hot - I will listen again when I feel better. @Networth

@Networth my boy said that shit was straight fire. Thanks so much for doing that for me.

Why this shit won’t play in a browser?

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@Networth I really wanna perfect it and for you to throw your edge and cut some lines but a lot of parts straight fire - and you can have it if you perfect it. If you ever make it just throw me a minor cut - that’s how and why I write too

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RIP CHRIS HOLLINS 2/4/95 (true story)

Air Mac 95s… can we get paid?

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It goes to Risdon moms and Hollins daughter but will there be more for us?

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I just wanna write and stay incognito at least until I feel better

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Nah I meant if he dead im a respect I think �� be day at a time but he deserve it

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Pac my everything for real though… always been my angel

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Hat hate shit has not a thing to do with me

I’ll just delete it all on my ig and start over again maybe idk

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Hard as fuck

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I want to see turquoise water and see if any of the minute amount of people left wanna try a cruise maybe or idk - just really need to scale and have fun

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They still typing thru me with that distasteful shit and I have no defense

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Exhale not scale*

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Yo if building blocks I want neon angels on the side of the highway for Newtown and a park by Ace where kids can just go exhale and drink

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For starters

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Think*

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It’s not funny at all

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I had the same dr how would you feel? Woyld you feel safe?

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Why are they trying to kill me so bad for anyway

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I believe it when I see it

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Marching… after all I been thru I pray the military kids learn to live and prefer it too

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Teej? He never seen me sane but used to laugh

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Nico got scared cause he never saw me angry before and Michaela I used to make cry all the time by accident… Jake and Madi I haven’t got to spend more time with cause the live so far but I’m coming

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I have a list guys for the kids in order of priority but we have to stack stack for all that too

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Jake awesome on the piano and Nico guitar perfect - maybe it’d be fun if the least one hit wonders if that’s what they want

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I can dream like I always do and did just praying for once my dream can live a little too