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I’m second verse. My homie is on the hook and first verse. Let me know how yall feeling this
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https://on.soundcloud.com/7Du51pLNBitY9wum8
I’m second verse. My homie is on the hook and first verse. Let me know how yall feeling this
I like this hook.. First verse was tight with the ryhme scheme & flow... real hip hop type shit here.. Nice intro and flow on the second verse.. good delivery voice as well.. hook is cool.. I like this.. good hp hop abstract sht here.. Im fukkin' wit it...Quote:
Originally Posted by John Noir
Yo thanks bro. This my first ever verse/songQuote:
Originally Posted by Ion Metatron
I’m second verse
love your verse and flow on this one, nice, SKILLZ
Yo, this track's got potential! Love the collab energy. Your verse needs a bit more punch though, maybe tighten the flow? Been messing around with Wordle Unlimited lately; helps sharpen my vocabulary, might help your writing too! Keep grinding, looking forward to hearing more.
The creative process unfolds like a winding path, filled with unexpected turns and breathtaking views. Music has a way of resonating deeply, evoking emotions that can be both raw and exhilarating. I remember once crafting a beat that mirrored the thrill of playing Slope Game, where every note felt like racing downhill. Let me know how everything vibes together—your feedback shapes the journey!
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The creative process unfolds like a winding path, filled with unexpected turns and breathtaking views. Music has a way of resonating deeply, evoking emotions that can be both raw and exhilarating. I remember once crafting a beat that mirrored the thrill of playing Slope Game, where every note felt like racing downhill. Let me know how everything vibes together—your feedback shapes the journey!