SORRY FOLK I DIDNT MEAN TO inTER FAIR I THOUGHT THIS WAS A RAP CONTEST NOT A LOVE SITE,TRY DOING THIS IN THE POETRY SECTION.PLEASE
SORRY FOLK I DIDNT MEAN TO inTER FAIR I THOUGHT THIS WAS A RAP CONTEST NOT A LOVE SITE,TRY DOING THIS IN THE POETRY SECTION.PLEASE
this is in a poerty sectin..
You guys need alot of work , i will edit why soon
PM for battle
we'll that was jus practitce i think...but i luv my man mista grim he puts a smile on my face atleast and he lightens up my day....
You two make me angry cause u are dumb as fuck. :yes:
Laying face down in the mainstream.Po.Ethics.
i make my self angry......
Nobody cares. :no:
Laying face down in the mainstream.Po.Ethics.
you both need elevation, mainly cuz this didnt rhyme and would have been betta with rhymes added in also the vocab and feeling was low so uppin oon that 1 nice topic as well, i felt ya'll was speaking through out i've had a long distance relationship be4
and its hard as shit...
nice peice felt the imagery creativity was fine......complexity was good cud of been better but good ...keep it up ill be looking for more peices from u....oh yeah and i also liked how the title matched the peice...and go hit up ma peice honestly its intitled Brotherly Love
thnks....
The animal wanna battle kid since u talkin shit
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