Curves In The Road (NICE)

[Spekz]

**i think its worth the read**
(first OM drop on this site, plz check it)

Missing the bestowed sign we barely slow with no sight of were to go
apprehension grows as a straight pathway hults to a curve in the road
strange traveling alien ways,asphalt holding us from everlasting space
passing nothing from no place,feels like we've been traveling for days
life inserts mishaps and twists,acquiring adventure for thrill seeking kids
road insists that this curve in life consists of things nobody thinks exists
swaying in silence viewing the side,floating cloads intensifies the drive
mind dries w/each image gone blind takin new by each bend in the ride
new wonders to view,you inlight anew chapter w/ever turn u pursue
fresh winding roads travel on through,a repetive life only brings review
exitement thats breathes the unreal,shock you feel when truthes reveal
plain reaks of an unfair deal,gasp of relief with every turn of the wheel
cant possibly live on like this,without crashing into a emotional abyss
steady life also needs time to reminisce,to this lifestyle thats frivolous
right to reality left to a lifestyle that speeds out of control
pressure to a soul,a rigurous life adventure will embrace its toll
air thickening fast,time ticking passed,adrenaline falls at last
last turn flashes hard to grasp,takin a fresh audacious past
bend paves a straight flow,to brake on slow and reload
everchanging events, youll just never know....................
....................when youll drive into another curve in the road

[Spekz]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3322819
Dancing With Rotten Flesh By:Twizted

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=241520
Abandoned By: Play-Boy

[Illus']

I actually like this piece.

Your piece suited the topic pretty well.
Grasp the topic nicely with your examples of
"Curves in the Road"

Nice throughout-

"cant possibly live on like this,without crashing into a emotional abyss
steady life also needs time to reminisce,to this lifestyle thats frivolous"

Those were the lines that stood out in my eyes-
While reading your piece I felt a since of me actually
taking a road trip or driving in the fall...
Good imagery displayed in my opinion. Others might
not see the imagery.

Your vocabulary was good pretty good
word usage. Nice rhyme scheme as well
lacked multies but to behonest every piece
doesn't have to have multies...


good piece overall stay dropping-
and elevating-

[Spekz]

Thanx 4 the good FB...

good 2 kno im doin things well...
appreciate ur FB!

Thank you

would like some more!

[Spekz]

Come on yall, no sleep'n on this....
1st drop, be nice and drop some feed....
im more then happy to return a favor....
igh...just get at me....and ill get back 2 u! lol igh

Bump Bump Bump

[Spekz]

come on yall...its not that long..just read it drop some feedback igh

will return the favor..just hit it up

igh

[Black Hornet]

yo, i like the rhymes and all but i think i just get too bored of the same line style over and over. I thought is was a good piece though. for real

[Spekz]

Thanx for the feedback..

however id have 2 say ive never heard of someone, getting bored cuz of structure lol...but w/e..thanx

peze

[~ladie_streetz~]

hmmm.... some lines were pretty much stretched out in this, you need to elevate with vocab also it was okay but you need to come with more creative words maybe you would have did better with another topic, the rhymes were okay but i wasnot feelin that flow, it was off at many times & basically through me off while i read

return the feed
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=242018

[Spekz]

^^thanx 4 the feedback constructive critizm is always worth the read, but ive been around here b4...and damn you never ever, have nething nice 2 say, even when it comes 2 the nicest lookin shit lol...no hate, just seems as ur a tough critic..igh

thanx again 4 the FEEDBACK!!

[Word.Play]

Yo i liked that shit... it was an inventive topic and it made me interested to check that shit out. you had good imagery.. the vocab was good it painted a perfect picture in the readers mind. the structure coulda used some work... it was off at the end and ur lines r pretty stretched. you had good rhymes and multis, that's something i really liked about ur shit...

all in all that was a dope drop i was feelin it homie... 9/10

yo peep the OM's in my sig... preferrably the last 1...

and check out one of my crews... its 4 topical heads only and i think u should drop a tryout..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...30#post3326130

good job keep it up

[Spekz]

yo thanx 4 the feedback

greatly appreciated...thanx again

i hit up one of ur pieces

so thanx

peze

[Spekz]

well i appreciate all the feedback...

but this is my last up..so hopefully i can get juat a lil bit more with this last up

igh

feedback will be helpful..and i will return favors

igh

(Hey if anybody lookin 4 a collab...im always done)

^^get at me on aim AIM: InkSpekz

[Spekz]

Havent up'd this is SUCH a long thing, but i havent had time 2 write lately.. sadly!!!

so i thought id make sure yall remember me lol j/p

put ya...check it

feed


drop links..and ill hit u back

[Spekz]

Havent up'd this is SUCH a long thing, but i havent had time 2 write lately.. sadly!!!

so i thought id make sure yall remember me lol j/p

put ya...check it

feed


drop links..and ill hit u back