con vs 4rensick

[Bonkers]

nov, if u understood shit.. you would get that round 4 punch.. * naw * retard.

[4renSICK]

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[4renSICK]

votes!

[miracle]

ur poll is 250 post?

[4renSICK]

3 votes 1 polled..

[Bonkers]

bump

[4renSICK]

real gay to make the post count 250 to vote

[JAE.K.A]

damn...felt this kinda a one sided battled...both had alright structure...but it slipped when it came to creativity.. Con lost it...but 4 wasn't far behind...overall weak battle...both coulda put more into it...but at the end 4s consistancy...outlasted contra..

vote-4

[4renSICK]

uppin/

[Donald Trump]

con you didn't come correct in this battles and although to you some of the lines you have seem dope, they lack wording and witt so i don't find them to be hard hitting dude, also fix your wording it throws up punches when your set-up doesnt go with the punch 4rensick you had an alright verse, nothing too amazing but you did have 1-2 decent lines and that was enough to get you the W

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...786/index.html
Hit that^

[Alyse Miller]

have you ever noticed your wack? i guess your trying dude..
but since your name is 4rensick, i figured you would find a clue
ok

use your brain and think about that punch..fatty, u'a easy win for me
now watch as i rap circles around him...
while he just falls out due to lack of energy
Nice


vs

.I'll Constrict His Lungs, stick ur Heart in ya air ways so i'm Beating ya Breath;
Then pourin' salt on ya wounds before you "Fall into Sleep" just to Season, ya Death!!
nice

This Faggot fuck is Garbage, Yes I said it. your trash, and This Bum's Stepping In?;
SHITTT! this'll “End without him Raising a Finger” like losing in Thumb Wrestling!!!
decent

He'll Be Asking for Protective Custody, talkin Shit will get this Mouse Sprayed;
Scared As Shit..........So "Contraband rolls with Police" like a Successful House Raid!!!
lol

Bite Off More than u could chew? He Waits for my lines like Hes Next up Fishing;
But now you "In Over Your Head" like bitches in 'Awkward Sex Positions'!!!
ok i like good closer



Con i seen better from you this wasnt your best imo. 4 came alot harder an more consitant here. punches was hitting harder an overral more polished then con

vote 4rens

[Amp]

He'll Be Asking for Protective Custody, talkin Shit will get this Mouse Sprayed;
Scared As Shit..........So "Contraband rolls with Police" like a Successful House Raid!!!

That line was really all I needed to see. 4rensick had better punches, that were way more personal and his verse flowed a lot better. His lines were longer, but he worked in multis, so that explains why.

Con, your punches were lacking the sting that is required for a victory in FL. They weren't set up as well as 4's were and the delivery…eh. Get more complex with your rhymes, and bring a little more creativity to them.

v/4rensick

[YungDosia]

have you ever noticed your wack? i guess your trying dude..
but since your name is 4rensick, i figured you would find a clue
LOL! nice.
he has no style or swagger with rap... i think he's hopeless
told him to step out the box, but he said "thats where my home is"
ROFL! Good flip on this concept feelin this.

Vs.

.I'll Constrict His Lungs, stick ur Heart in ya air ways so i'm Beating ya Breath;
Then pourin' salt on ya wounds before you "Fall into Sleep" just to Season, ya Death!!
LOL nice wordplay.
He'll Be Asking for Protective Custody, talkin Shit will get this Mouse Sprayed;
Scared As Shit..........So "Contraband rolls with Police" like a Successful House Raid!!!
Good nameplay liked this.


This match was closer then people saying n the votes both had some nice bars i liked but 4ren had the more consistant verse, his opener was also an okay line but wording fuckd it up so it wasnt quotable. But yeah 4 takes this with better overall verse and consistancy. No hate to either. Pretty coo read

V-4ren