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December 27th, 2011, 10:52 PM
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Last edited by Sykonaut; December 29th, 2011 at 07:28 PM
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December 29th, 2011, 06:57 AM
#2
Re: I am I
Sorry fixed the video, it wasn't playing for some reason >.<
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December 29th, 2011, 11:53 AM
#3
Lion's Den is out now!!!
Re: I am I
This is on some different type shit.... Quality is a real issue but I love what you came with.... would sound real dope if you actually had some solid equipment cause you have a really tight recording voice
Please return the favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...023/index.html
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December 29th, 2011, 02:23 PM
#4
Re: I am I
Thanks yeah I know it sounds okay with headphones but through speakers it's shit >.< I have a good mic I'm just doing something wrong when I mix it. Too much db?
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December 29th, 2011, 04:36 PM
#5
Put your sunglasses on!
Re: I am I
Not really sure what to make of this to be honest. Lyrics were pretty cool actually, but the beat was monotonous and weird. It was almost like some spoken word with a horrible beat in the background. Delivery and emotion were good, but flow completely clashed with the beat. Its like you wrote down your verse, had what you wanted to say, then performed it over a generic fruity loops sample. Quality could be better but you already know that. Basically, Good lyrics, interesting sound, but didnt work with the instrumental.
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December 29th, 2011, 04:49 PM
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Re: I am I
Appreciate it I kinda feel the same way I am reworking this currently
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December 29th, 2011, 06:16 PM
#7
Repping for Jakob22 Music
Re: I am I
Sounds like some dub poetry lyricsm is there but it doesn't seem to match the beat at all no rhythmic rules behind how you are spitting. It would actually sound better if you spit this on a accpeella to appreciate the writing.
refeed
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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...912/index.html
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December 29th, 2011, 07:15 PM
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Re: I am I
I'm working on the beatand audio quality, I know there is something missing it is a kind of empty beat, but I can fix it this was a real quick song, like 45 minutes, including writing as I recorded, I do very much appreciate the critique's
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