vs. DIA aka CODEALT
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u can mean mug all u want, i dare u to do something,
Broken Escalator, them Stares aint gon move nothing.
☆☆☆☆☆ this was an exceptional bar, i haven't seen the "stairs/stares" pun used before so that immediately wow'ed me, i loved how you used a broken escalator to tie in your pun usage, and rhyming something with nothing was pretty bad ass if you ask me
shotgun waitin for u to come thru, emotionless-blank faced,
soon as Code Enter i Release Bucks to him like a Bank Safe.
☆☆☆☆☆ the imagery of an emotionless-blank face is unreal, well done, i love it when people use "bucks" as a way not only to describe an individual discharging a firearm (in this case a shotgun) but also flipping it to go both ways and meany money as well, i was tickled to read this bar
i embody evil, i need the most highs in heaven near me,
u face in smoke wit the devil, this aint a 9-11 theory.
☆☆☆☆☆ the "facing/face in" wordplay here was truly inventive, you have a wonderful approach to wordplays and you should be commended for that, i love how you emphasized it wasn't a 9-11 theory because at first it really felt like it
i'll scope em' while he twisting a blunt, i put a hole in em',
that means, ill put a single dot on Die while he's rollin one.
☆☆☆☆☆ tremendously impressive usage of the single dot (infrared beam) tie-in with the "Die/Dia" nameflip, followed by subtly describe dice, i shutter to think what would happen when you put the dot on him, i'm glad you left that up in the air and allowed our imagination to reveal what would transpire after the dot was on
i dont drink, so u know u wont see me in bars,
guns like Skater Shoes, the Kicks will have D seein Stars/DC n Stars.
☆☆☆☆☆ props on being straight edge and man enough to admit you don't partake in alcohol consumption, that was big of you and my respect for you cannot be understated because of it, i appreciate you explaining your "D seein Stars/DC in Stars" single letter nameflip, i so did not notice it but when you detailed what you were going for i instantly realized that dc is a popular company that manufactures shoes tailored for skateboarders
before we shoot it out, we can box, i wan't to beat yo ass first,
give Code a number of combinations like im tryn guess a PassWord.
☆☆☆☆☆ using two "Code" nameflips in one verse is pretty impressive, this struck close to home as i sometimes have difficulty remembering passwords which usually culminates in me having to rely on guesswork
he's a mod, so he gotta fake record, do these wins exist or not?
he's 100 and 1? pfffft, Dalmations..im taking this bitches spot.
☆☆☆☆☆ dalmations have spots so this bar made perfect sense to me, no complaint here as my neighbor owns a dalmation and it's adorable
stock Chopper, you'll be eating Harder Rounds than a GobStopper,
Kru goin in....im breaking this Guy-Code like im a cock blocker.
☆☆☆☆☆ i hope you weren't being serious about identifying yourself as a cock blocker because i have a low opinion of cock blockers in general, this was a nice simile and i applaud your execution of it
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