Audio Chat

[Wuxia]

I still check out some old stuff on it. I have my freestyles from back then and RM's GRB battles all bookmarked.

[Art.]

I still check out some old stuff on it. I have my freestyles from back then and RM's GRB battles all bookmarked.

I always wanted in on those tourneys and always missed sign ups lol

[Soule]

What's the link?

[Art.]

What's the link?

2 songs I’ve never posted here figured I throw them on

[Soule]

It looks like soundclick was removed when they added a bunch of stuff. I know I was adding stuff when I was admin for a while but I don't remember taking anything away.

If you add it to SoundCloud you can do it that way.

[Lenox]

Anyone tryna collab for my ep

[Soule]

Trying to figure out why it won't embed your track.

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There we go. You're set.

[Lenox]

Beat is sick. Wu Tang type ish. I think your flow and delivery is smooth. Gives me Ghostface vibes. I'd like to see you tackle a beat and ride it (no homo). While you do your thing here the beat has a little too much to flow on. It's nice to see you drop a track. This felt more like a key style over a best if that makes sense. Good shit but I'd like to see more.

Yo I appreciate the feedback. I’m actually super new to recording so I’m tryna figure out my style or how to make songs even I’ll keep working tho. Thx

[Soule]

Definitely have potential. Keep it up bro

[Lenox]

I wasn't expecting it to be this good.

The pro's
- rode the beat well for the most part (faltered a couple times but overall pretty good)
- lyrics were cool because they flowed well although i didn't always know what you were talking about
- beat choice suits you

areas of improvement
- need to project your voice more. you're using your head voice but you gotta use your chest voice
- more punchlines (this seemed like a swag n flow piece with flow heavily tipping the scale)

Overall enjoyed it but definitely need to project your voice more

keep at it

Yooooo fressshh. Thank u bro. Thanks for all the feedback too. In regards to the punchlines yea I agree. It’s a song that’s gonna be on my ep that’s all swag and flow really

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I’ll start tryna project my voice more, I feel like if I try to really rap I sound wack. Idk lol

[Lenox]

This actually sounds alot like the current underground hip-hop trend. It's going to take a bit of effort on your part to differentiate yourself from the crowd because there are alot of dudes with similar production and swag/flow. With that said...I loved it. Everything I just pointed out was done so that you realize for yourself not to get lost in the shuffle. The writing is great, the flow is on point. You did sound kind of, I don't know, quiet and reserved on the beat. But I could sense you were comfortable with your material, enough where you definitely put swag into it without it coming off unnatural. 2:30 seconds is a bit short for me, especially with the outro included. Maybe go for 3 minutes at least on each track. That gives me 2 verses and 3 hooks, and I think that would suit you as well. I'm not opposed to just doing a verse with no hook, as long as the length of the track is extended so that the verse doesn't leave you wanting. So yeah, it's dope. Props, man.

Yoooo. Thank you bro. This message really pushes me to keep going. Last few days I haven’t been able to finish this track cuz I’m literally stuck.. I can’t find my flow right now it’s so fucking frustrating

[Lenox]

@Soule listen to mine and lmk if it deserves a nomination

[Soule]

@Soule listen to mine and lmk if it deserves a nomination

The London one? I think it's good but I wanna hear you drop a track incorporating the feedback and advice you were given. I.e. riding the beat and using your chest.

[Lenox]

The London one? I think it's good but I wanna hear you drop a track incorporating the feedback and advice you were given. I.e. riding the beat and using your chest.

Alright bet

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I thought I rode the beat personally but I agree on using my chest 1000

[Soule]

It's one of those underground wu tang beats that has a lot going on so even when you're vibing with it it still sounds like a freestyle. I wanna see something with more rhythm personally.