WK07: (0-0) brokenhalo vs. (0-0) Midwest (Midwest Wins)

[Wuxia]

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Regular Battle
Verses due NO DUE DATES*
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES*

Must check-in 24/48 hours for NO DUE DATES to take effect
*be reasonable

10-lines MAX Regular Battle
16-lines MAX Contendership and Championship Battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@brokenhalo
@Midwest

[Midwest]

Checkity check.. time to see if this old timer still has it

Good luck broski

[Midwest]

Ayo yada yada..

Gods apprentice,chop ya headless just left with a broken halo.
Often wreckless with lots of weapons and an explosive payload.
Should have prayed more, better chance survival tip toe’in past claymores.
I Give the people what they came for..
wave swords and slay whores like Gary ridgeway
My swift rage inflicts pain, best to no show or take a sick day
Or better yet..
Dose some ketimine,and drift away with a pair of slit veins.
Leave your offense in big pain..
as you’re trampled by the monster from Midway!
Good Day chump you’ve just been raped by pastor west
Barely have to flex, to get the Crowd Pumped and collapse your chest.


Eh

[brokenhalo]

Yo faggot you sound depressed my words are zoloft
with profound effects like albert fish ill drown your kids
catch your family at walmart then I spit rounds with techs
I don't aim so who ever gets hit goes down a thousand depths
midwest you weigh 600 hundred pounds
everyday you battle breath
clothes super sized but your like a quarter pound from death
midwest is a prime example
of a man child yapping on discord mommy's little meddling nuisance
looking like a tik toker that a child molester influenced
This dude was always a bit fruity and foolish
Topeka chic, his style shouts 'confused but carefree
This guy's a weird freak,holding a loaded gun,bad knees,




Pic was deleted bc it was not agreed on and your verse was 20lines..max is 10.. so I deleted anything after the ten (I gave ya two days to edit it ur self but u ain’t responding -mir

[daveDILLY]

this is close
could go either way
i think mid had the better written bars
broke had the tiktoker line that was ok
could go any direction 2be real
brokens setup lines made me feel like a punch was coming
but then it was just kind of like a statement
both had statements but 2me midwest was written better

winner midwest

[Fresh]

I think you guys should go check some HOF battles and get an idea of what a great verse looks like. I'm barely seeing punchlines but more swag n flow / statementish bars from both.

With that being said, i thought midwest read smoother so gonna give him the vote

v/ Midwest

[miracle]

VOTE Midwest

Both are missing what is needed to setup/delivery a punch.. no hate just need to work on being more creative n direct.. mids verse was slightly above halo

[Slayerr.]

Yeah neither are what LLL is all about. Midwest ket line was lotb but it’s a pretty low bar
V/midwest

[Exalted.]

v Midwest, edged it w the overall read

[Spree]

Midwest wins