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@daveDILLY @slecht
Last edited by miracle; January 20th, 2024 at 08:22 PM
nice
good luck man
Likewise, bud!
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u worthless on some nerd shit - ya 2 fragile & calm..Originally Posted by slecht
plus your name sound like the noise when i pull my dick outa ur mom
ur last battles were stretched - with a flow that no1s adoring..
no matter what essay every1 here knows it going to be long & boring
saving urself for marriage is nice - every1 should adopt this..
slecth is a virgin by choice - its just unfortunately not his
youngin prolly scared of the pussy - type to cry when it thunder 2..
stays posting with Angelina cuz that’s the only time a bitch under u
the richcoastrican? u aint in a relationship outa fear..
it’s a shame you & ur last girl drifted apart, on the raft tryna get here
I'm hurting him, nephews...he's a joke to battle rap, rappin' in(tents) like his words have a curfew.
it doesn’t matter what this freak shows, as long as this clown stays clapping on stage…the circus continues!
I might cut ya face with the machete & I am done for the day, I have something to say.
Dave! Before you attempt to run up, and away, you’ll get sliced up with my blade…I simply cut to the chase
these techs are so official, you'd think I'm talking refs when they blow the whistle
pulling up & grabbin' the bag, taking Dill quicker like I said hold the pickles
Staying on top like the North Star, wonder child. Just like the West, I’m running wild.
U? Career going down, stuck down south like a Broken Compass dial
you sho talk shit... you should retire ur writing or come back with a plan
the talk show host is the only time people are interested in a dave letter, man...
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Dill dropped way better in our battle. Couldn’t really find a line I really like this verse tbh. Slecht’s verse was only a touch better. Conceptually I favored it more as well as the flow. But only by a smidge. Hold the pickles would be the only standout. You had better attempts here.
V/ Sletcht
dave
u worthless on some nerd shit - ya 2 fragile & calm..
plus your name sound like the noise when i pull my dick outa ur mom
damn thats how you feel about him? lol
ur last battles were stretched - with a flow that no1s adoring..
no matter what essay every1 here knows it going to be long & boring
not feelings this one.
saving urself for marriage is nice - every1 should adopt this..
slecth is a virgin by choice - its just unfortunately not his
lol
youngin prolly scared of the pussy - type to cry when it thunder 2..
stays posting with Angelina cuz that’s the only time a bitch under u
didnt like this one.
the richcoastrican? u aint in a relationship outa fear..
it’s a shame you & ur last girl drifted apart, on the raft tryna get here
pfft lol
vs
slecht
I'm hurting him, nephews...he's a joke to battle rap, rappin' in(tents) like his words have a curfew.
it doesn’t matter what this freak shows, as long as this clown stays clapping on stage…the circus continues!
no
I might cut ya face with the machete & I am done for the day, I have something to say.
Dave! Before you attempt to run up, and away, you’ll get sliced up with my blade…I simply cut to the chase
ironically this bar did NOT cut to the chase. i believe that was deliberate. bravo
these techs are so official, you'd think I'm talking refs when they blow the whistle
pulling up & grabbin' the bag, taking Dill quicker like I said hold the pickles
pause
Staying on top like the North Star, wonder child. Just like the West, I’m running wild.
U? Career going down, stuck down south like a Broken Compass dial
a bit too upfront for my liking. this concept needs to be taken up a notch
you sho talk shit... you should retire ur writing or come back with a plan
the talk show host is the only time people are interested in a dave letter, man...
this was ok.
im going with dave on this one. this was pretty one sided imo. slecht you had some good rhyme schemes going but i feel you were faltering on your punches. The payoffs just werent there.
v/Dave
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Dave - I think most of your punches were light jabs or misses here. The essay word play doesn’t really work. Dick out your mum and virgin y choice were your best lines but I’ve seen much better from you
Slecht- I think you’ve got a lot of potential. Cut to the chase was a good concept but I’d focus on making your wording a bit more harsher and unpredictable in more of a text battle style as yours is written more audio style. The whole similie at the end of a bar I’ve never been a fan of as it just seems a lazy way to end something but defo a lot of potential if you can change your style slightly.
V/dilly
ur last battles were stretched - with a flow that no1s adoring..
no matter what essay every1 here knows it going to be long & boring
the richcoastrican? u aint in a relationship outa fear..
it’s a shame you & ur last girl drifted apart, on the raft tryna get here
vs
I'm hurting him, nephews...he's a joke to battle rap, rappin' in(tents) like his words have a curfew.
it doesn’t matter what this freak shows, as long as this clown stays clapping on stage…the circus continues!
you sho talk shit... you should retire ur writing or come back with a plan
the talk show host is the only time people are interested in a dave letter, man...
Highlights are quotes, lowlights are dick in mouth and cut to the chase. I felt slechts wording was very long overall, but leaving that & the amount of punctuation marks aside, the content was generally good. I got this 2v2 and for a matter of preference I enjoyed daves verse more
v/dave
opener was alright.. essay and closer cool
Vs
Letterman
flow was there, bars were a little long but I can get down with that style to
Vote DD overall more hits
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4-1 Dave
Last edited by miracle; February 10th, 2024 at 01:41 PM
Dave killed this in my honest opinion
opening three lines were nice but dick out of your mom and that virgin by choice were fire
legit realise Letterman was Slecht, sup btw? much prefer you with a short bar style over this longer one but DD got you here and pretty comfortably imho
WORD P e r f e c t !
RESERVOIR GODS
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I got Dave.. less risky stayed safer and it paid off w drift apart, essay
Slecht had some played stuff in there dave Letter was eh.
6-1 Dave
u worthless on some nerd shit - ya 2 fragile & calm..
plus your name sound like the noise when i pull my dick outa ur mom
lol dope
ur last battles were stretched - with a flow that no1s adoring..
no matter what essay every1 here knows it going to be long & boring
ditto lol
saving urself for marriage is nice - every1 should adopt this..
slecth is a virgin by choice - its just unfortunately not his
okay
youngin prolly scared of the pussy - type to cry when it thunder 2..
stays posting with Angelina cuz that’s the only time a bitch under u
either worded wrong for just over my head
the richcoastrican? u aint in a relationship outa fear..
it’s a shame you & ur last girl drifted apart, on the raft tryna get here
lol... going in on dude
I'm hurting him, nephews...he's a joke to battle rap, rappin' in(tents) like his words have a curfew.
it doesn’t matter what this freak shows, as long as this clown stays clapping on stage…the circus continues!
wordy but okay
I might cut ya face with the machete & I am done for the day, I have something to say.
Dave! Before you attempt to run up, and away, you’ll get sliced up with my blade…I simply cut to the chase
again wordy but i get it
these techs are so official, you'd think I'm talking refs when they blow the whistle
pulling up & grabbin' the bag, taking Dill quicker like I said hold the pickles
needs work
Staying on top like the North Star, wonder child. Just like the West, I’m running wild.
U? Career going down, stuck down south like a Broken Compass dial
i'm seeing your wordplay ... just not funny
you sho talk shit... you should retire ur writing or come back with a plan
the talk show host is the only time people are interested in a dave letter, man...
again needs work
Dave brought the house down on dude and he was a far reach from matchin him
v-dave
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
Dave wins
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