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Thread: WK09: Miracle (6-3) vs Slashe (0-0) (MIR WINS)

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    WK09: Miracle (6-3) vs Slashe (0-0) (MIR WINS)

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    Re: WK09: Miracle (6-3) vs Slashe (0-0)

    Checkin.

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    Re: WK09: Miracle (6-3) vs Slashe (0-0)

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    Re: WK09: Miracle (6-3) vs Slashe (0-0)

    you should diet quick. the stomach easily covers your inner thighs.
    This clown been penny-pinchin so long 'IT's face look like penny-wise
    but you won't scare many guys. last week's status. how can we fear that
    I walked in battlin with drunken-fist, u keep askin where the beer's at
    Is this panthera mir-kat? pussy either way. the femine type
    he exhibited di-morphism. n that's before I skinned him alive
    It's Sly how I Snipe the fakes. Stop the lies or get demolition man to face
    You been on a pump ad-Ventura skin n bone with a body that always looked that way
    Ain't hard to bash n champs. Come into battles with cash in hand
    last food for thought you brought came after you had to cash in stamps.

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    Re: WK09: Miracle (6-3) vs Slashe (0-0)

    Your easy work my dude… everything u write is trash
    My punches leaving voters in stitches…wtf you think I’ll do to a slash
    The 9 will rip thru you,.. mir will murder your ass
    Hollow points send you to a better place like being bumped to first class
    Y bother making fun... he’s getting laid out in the mud
    The only people ragging on him will be paramedics soaking up the blood
    I’ll taekwon-do this faggot bro… kick ya head off into a spiral
    Bring the foot to your face like getting confronted by ninja turtles rival
    You think I fear this queer?? pleaseee I’m built for combat
    If slash alarming to me, hes screaming n showing police where I’m at
    Last edited by miracle; March 21st, 2024 at 09:06 PM

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    Re: WK09: Miracle (6-3) vs Slashe (0-0) (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    you should diet quick. the stomach easily covers your inner thighs.
    This clown been penny-pinchin so long 'IT's face look like penny-wise
    IT the clown?... the wording needs work


    but you won't scare many guys. last week's status. how can we fear that
    I walked in battlin with drunken-fist, u keep askin where the beer's at
    the wording again

    Is this panthera mir-kat? pussy either way. the femine type
    he exhibited di-morphism. n that's before I skinned him alive
    i've seem mir-kat used before but yours was a better take
    as for the second line.. "n that's after" would ave been better


    It's Sly how I Snipe the fakes. Stop the lies or get demolition man to face
    You been on a pump ad-Ventura skin n bone with a body that always looked that way
    this could be alot better... no pun intended but miracle aint skinny

    Ain't hard to bash n champs. Come into battles with cash in hand
    last food for thought you brought came after you had to cash in stamps.
    this makes not sence.. sorry bro


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    Your easy work my dude… everything u write is trash
    My punches leaving voters in stitches…wtf you think I’ll do to a slash
    dope

    The 9 will rip thru you,.. mir will murder your ass
    Hollow points send you to a better place like being bumped to first class
    new.. see you tri to take the first class cocepts...


    Y bother making fun... he’s getting laid out in the mud
    The only people ragging on him will be paramedics soaking up the blood
    i can tell the is a key ... not bad though

    I’ll taekwon-do this faggot bro… kick ya head off into a spiral
    Bring the foot to your face like getting confronted by ninja turtles rival
    a foot clan punch.. not bad though.. like i said.. can tell this is a key

    You think I fear this queer?? pleaseee I’m built for combat
    If slash alarming to me, hes screaming n showing police where I’m at
    no miracle no... bad mir bad


    overall i got miracle winning this easily

    vote- miracle
    aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing

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    Re: WK09: Miracle (6-3) vs Slashe (0-0) (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    It's Sly how I Snipe the fakes. Stop the lies or get demolition man to face
    You been on a pump ad-Ventura skin n bone with a body that always looked that way
    Ain't hard to bash n champs. Come into battles with cash in hand
    last food for thought you brought came after you had to cash in stamps.

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    I’ll taekwon-do this faggot bro… kick ya head off into a spiral
    Bring the foot to your face like getting confronted by ninja turtles rival


    But Miracle's verse was more consistently written and easier to understand.

    Vote - Miracle.

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    Re: WK09: Miracle (6-3) vs Slashe (0-0) (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    I think like slash had some dope af concepts but just didn’t execute them that cleanly which was a shame. It was a bit wordy and the actually delivery lacked impact on a lot of the bars. Miracles was okay enough for the win but no haymaker in his verse I think miracles closer was lotb

    V/mir

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    Re: WK09: Miracle (6-3) vs Slashe (0-0) (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Ain't hard to bash n champs. Come into battles with cash in hand
    last food for thought you brought came after you had to cash in stamps.

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    Your easy work my dude… everything u write is trash
    My punches leaving voters in stitches…wtf you think I’ll do to a slash
    Y bother making fun... he’s getting laid out in the mud
    The only people ragging on him will be paramedics soaking up the blood


    I felt like slash wording hurt him as i could not understand some of the lines. Some good concepts in there but felt a bit lackluster in terms of execution. Miracle didnt need to do much here highlights are these 2 that I felt were dope

    v / FGR

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    Re: WK09: Miracle (6-3) vs Slashe (0-0) (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Is this panthera mir-kat? pussy either way. the femine type
    he exhibited di-morphism. n that's before I skinned him alive

    vs

    Y bother making fun... he’s getting laid out in the mud
    The only people ragging on him will be paramedics soaking up the blood
    You think I fear this queer?? pleaseee I’m built for combat
    If slash alarming to me, hes screaming n showing police where I’m at

    This battle isn’t as close as the quotes would make it seem. Dimorphism is the only one I like from Slash. I considered about the food for thought line but you gotta flip that better because it isn’t a new concept and your flip on it wasn’t anything special.

    I actually think Mir was more consistent overall, despite me only quoting two of his punches. The others were ok as well. I think this is clear for Miracle.

    v/Mir

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    Re: WK09: Miracle (6-3) vs Slashe (0-0) (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Mir wins

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