WK21: Phalanx (1-0) vs Slashe (0-1) (PHAL WINS)

[miracle]

Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@Slashe
@Phalanx

[Slashe]

Checking in.

[Slashe]

Firin off at the mouth is hollow. I doubt this a loss you'll swallow
cuz is Phalanx spits out tungsten-cord, the rest of his bowels will follow

[Phalanx]

These punches leave him more then phased, Talking on the floor displayed
Yeah one hit will have Slashe catching z's in this thread like Zoro's blade

[mal diction]

Slashe, i get it a little forced but i et it.. tongue then cord ... Phay was way forced cus zoro didnt catch z's with his sword

v-slashe

[Slayerr.]

I think phal came a little bit cleaner with his flip, slashes was a bit forced, zs in this thread wasn’t bad

V/phal

[King Dee Bee]

This turned out to be a little tough one to judge. I'm assuming Slashe meant "IF" Phalanx Spit and not "IS" because reading it with Is kinda bothers me for some reason so I'll just say If.

Now to the bars itself, the reason why it's hard to decide here in my opinion is I think Slashe had the better concept. If battles are close we are kinda forced to Nit pick here. Phalanx had the cleaner wording and better execution. I feel like My vote woulda easily went the other way if it woulda been a more violent "gun or Anchor in the mouth" reference in the set up, which woulda helped the gore level in the follow up line. Phalanx had a dope set up AND a clean punch. So MVGT Phalanx.

[Exalted.]

pretty close here

tungsten cord was a creative concept.. but idk if I'm catching ten as then? that's a bit of a hangup in a risky idea. Phalanx still had a solid z line w/ thread/slashe tie in. I think I got Phal here overall.

V phallus

[Echelon]

This is actually one of the best battles of the site.. GOOD JOB GUYS..

V/ SLASHE

[daveDILLY]

i dont get where slashe going wit his bar
tungs then cord? wtf does that mean
tongues then cord like vocal cord?
if thats it, it dont work for me
tongue being plural throws me off
then just saying cord for vocal cord is weird
maybe im totally off. @Slashe dm me & lmk wtf going on
phal your shit was ok, nothing that creative
but as it sits right now enuff for the win
if slashe dm tells me something im missing i will change
but as of right now winner phalanx

[MV]

V/Phal

Tungsten-cord need a bit of work on the wording but the overall all concept was dope. I have Phal taking this one with a more polished punch.

[miracle]

Phal wins 5-2