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@Meks.
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pistol whip you with a mauser, Yowzer... it'll leave a mean lump
that ill chunk
n pieces of meks will have my classic gun looking steam punked
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^ @Meks.
You're never straight to the point, you spend hours and hours just to waste our time..
And since we grading on a curve?....... you get a DMV cuz mother fuckers hate your lines
Ayoooo first ima start by saying this battle is my favorite currently and I don’t think you two should have faced off first round lol �� I’ve got so much to freaking breakdown however I’ll keep it light.
Mv
pistol whip you with a mauser, Yowzer... it'll leave a mean lump
that ill chunk
n pieces of meks will have my classic gun looking steam punked
Such a creative concept I truly enjoyed it. Very vivid and descriptive for a rap battle. You have amazing talent and raw skill.
Nice word choice and punch line for me was dope. Just off the way it was delivered really I was able to visualize a scene from an anime where mechs get destroyed by a god tier gun which just really brings such power and connection to multiple words in the scheme, yowser, mean chunks of meks steam punk honestly this was a solid 8.5/10 - I never give ten so that means it was exceptional
Meks:
You're never straight to the point, you spend hours and hours just to waste our time..
And since we grading on a curve?....... you get a DMV cuz mother fuckers hate your lines
The buildup here is frightening, I almost felt like I had to renew my license, this piece is also very descriptive however here the punch just simply hits harder. The agony or going to dmv and making sure you have all you need or risk being sent back “never straight to the point “ wasting hours of time” grading on a curve - dmv grades you on technical driving abilities and your angles or curves- or reversing the starting line with you never being straight to the point then obviously it’s a curve anyways you get a D Mv because ppl literally hate the dmv lines. This was well put together I see why many take a few weeks. This was well polished and I think I see what I’m doing wrong- people want to be able to read it through and understand a concept that makes sense then find little intricate things after. I usually make it super complicated which ppl can’t read through because they have to stop and figure out where I’m going especially when it’s layered. Bar 9.3/10
Ok that does it my vote is for mek but an amazing battle I’m sure this will be down the middle for some but I think I chose correctly in terms of battle rap.
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i agree, Meks it harder
i'm going with Meks... straight to the point..DMV, was very creative nameplay
v-meks
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
i am giving it 2 meks
i liked the nameplay
hit harder 2me
mv was gud just not as hard
winner meks
Yeah meks got this.. right to the point.. simple and I can’t say I’ve seen a dmv line on him, I’m sure he prob seen them but I can’t recall it so meks gets my vote..mv read a little awkward to me not to mention I had to pm him to find out wtf he was talking about lol idk if it’s the philly or stoner in me that prefer a straight to the point approach
Vote MEKS
meks wins
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