Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
Rebuttal Option
both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
First to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@mal diction
@miracle
Last edited by miracle; June 9th, 2024 at 12:49 AM
yeah...
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
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Mal’s WACK, FAT and NOTHING CRIMINAL..vs me, in LLL how’s Mir winning joe?
false Jesus line? So typical …but i dont need magic, smoke or mirrors to pull a miracle
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aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
Facing you is like a bye week. There’s nothing dope ya concealing
Ur skill level has never beneficial n beating you doesn’t give us that feeling
Mal
Definitely did well, I feel like that punch probably hits harder than I’m currently thinking I’m just a bit busy so haven’t really dug deep, however the not needing magic smoke and mirrors to pull a miracle was pretty decent.
I don’t fully comprehend the buildup lines right now I’m sure when my schedule clears and I’m really dissecting all of these bars I’ll catch it better but in terms of concise and clear currently I don’t feel I followed the first half of the bar well
Miracle
Hey not your best not your worst I kinda feel like I see a type in the second line either your skill level was never beneficial- or your skill level has never been beneficial- but currently it says your skill level has never beneficial and I can say that’s my only real negative.
Mal I like that you got personal miracle I don’t think you got that personal however as I feel in this moment I believe it’s fair I vote miracle as I understand his bar fully and I didn’t need to dissect it to get it. Although I wish text battle rap was more accepting to that but I totally get it. My vote miracle however good job mal good freaking job your creativity is just getting better and better from the past weeks I’ve seen. Will be interesting to see who wins this one honestly good battle
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it should read Fa, Q, I read it for kicks
Miracle I feel like “your skill level has never beneficial” as it’s written just doesn’t make sense although I do like the flip and you tie it back in with benifical after, maybe it would’ve worked better if you’d written been official and let us work out benifical for ourselves would’ve been better. Mals was bad, to pull a miracle in the uk would mean like seducing him so that’s where I went to first but I have to overlook that being on an American forum haha. But still I feel like it lacked creativity although the structure was good. Can’t say miracles robbed mal this time it’s pretty clear cut
V/mir
Mal was aight, in the UK "pulling" someone is usually in reference to hooking up, eg, gonna pull a bitch tonight. I'm a fan of aggressive homosexuality if it's done to establish dominance and not just consensual bumming so it worked OK for me.
Miracles beneficial wordplay is pretty dated but it was written way cleaner than his opponents so I got him with a slight edge.
Vote Miracle
Miracles been official wordplay was the deciding factor and the bar flowed smooth.
Mals seemed a little cluttered but I like the downplay of miracle
V/ mir
Mir wins 4-0
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