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first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Unfukwitable
Check
dont try to outrun ur fate, post ur bar so i can murk what u say with some haste
u've a scheduled meeting with La Muerte n you u gonna be Late even if Ándale
Last edited by MV; July 23rd, 2024 at 07:25 AM
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I ‘Got this Mark pressed’.. mac10s sever his dome piece
Ain’t the one who ‘M—boss’ a round I’ll leave M—printed in memories only!
Last edited by Unfukwitable; July 23rd, 2024 at 09:19 AM Reason: WORDING TYPO*
I’m ngl Mv be having some dope concepts but for me this one just didn’t register idk if I’m just too busy or what but I get the overall message of him getting killed fast and being late to his own funeral kinda thing..
FUCK smh UN delay!!! I’m so slowwwww omg sorry Mv that was decent but still I won’t change votes I think both did well
Unfuk this to me was a real winning bar for me bro ngl
First the mark pressed’ or printed emblem - then m boss around like the boss belt’ was hard reference to the belt and also the liquor but mainly the belt
Then imprint and m print in memory related well with the Mac 10 busting the dome.. like leaving a imprint on his brain but also leaving him a memory to everyone was dope
Fair vote for unfuk
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MV your concept set up was so fire the imagery & all
But the punch didn’t have much sting factor IMO.
Unfuck Simple but effective on the flip it landed tho vote - Unfuck
MV set the punch up well & the Andale bar landed well. The rhymes throughout weren't multis, at least in the 2 accents I tried, but reminded me of when Em used to do the same before he got sober, dope.
Liked what fukwit was going for, the mark pressed & m-boss would've won this for you executed better. The M-printed closer took away from the work you put in building up to it. Emboss works but emprint is an obsolete word. Had the better wordplay in the set up no doubts just wish you'd have made that the punch.
Its actually a tie but a dope punch got to overrule a dope ser up so got a slight edge to MV. Wouldn't be mad at either winning though.
Vote MV
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Both creative here - was feeling both but while mvs connected it just didn't hit as hard
Vote unfuck
nice 1 here
unfuk took this wit the stronger hit
it just landed harder
mv had a dope idea & start up
but the punch didnt give me as much as unfuk
winner unfuk
Mv was dope but I think there was just a bit too much going on for me where as unfuck wasn’t as dope but was a bit more direct so felt more impactful. Dope battle wouldn’t be mad which way it went
V/unfuck
UNFUK WINS
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