WK31: Fresh (7-8) vs Bag Mandela (4-2) (FRESH WINS)

[miracle]

Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Bag Mandela
@Fresh

[Fresh]

Check. First to 4 wins?

[Bag Mandela]

Ur easy as lawn mowing, even on guard n extra prepared,
When our 2 blades clash you'll smell fresh in the air

[Fresh]

your universe will end, cousin parents & uncle when i deploy all my arsenal
n' if u think your antimatter? watch her die slow as 1 by 1 I destroy every particle

[Virbius]

Oh I dunno which way to go with this one.

Bag’s lawnmower bar was pretty cool, if I were to nitpick it I’d have to say it was slightly jarring that I’d be able to smell someone being cut by a sword. Maybe if the setup mentioned something about leaving his body to decompose or something like that it would’ve primed me for the punchline about an odour. Still good though.

Fresh’s threat that he would destroy his opponent’s aunty one atom at a time was weird as hell, but I dig it. The aunty/anti wordplay element itself was kinda meh, but the overall bar was just the right level of stupid to resonate with me and my own stupidity.

Vote: Fresh.

[Lady Poet]

This is tough both Punchline killer

I felt like Fresh Punchline had a better set up

Vote-Fresh

[KnoXville.]

Fresh punch landed smoother here cool match

[Slayerr.]

Freshs was pretty cool not sure anti matter works but I said it in a stupid accent to sound like you lot across the pond and it works better in that voice. Bags punch was nice but I really did not like “ur easy as mowing lawn” I get it’s the set up and necessary but it’s a pretty stupid statement and a bit childish to me which took away from a nice flip
V/fresh

[Unfukwitable]

Both bars was good I like how bags line was worded with the set up but I felt Freshs lines took the edge no hate here both lines were solid def think easy as mowing could’ve been worded better…. U could’ve also used ya own name to help the bar fill the bags with sticks or sumn idk lol props im high

[Meks.]

bag - was a good bar, maybe a little too simple and trying to weave in a little more complex shit in here could have made this a really heavy hitter.

fresh - cool concept, i feel like more-so geared toward a battle rather than a 1 bar battle - i really wish particle did a little more in this bar to end it harder. The set up was cool and so was antimatter but i feel like it just wasnt as hard as it was a cool concept.

really tough call - never seen a fresh cut grass against fresh before... but it was less complex, fuckin hell fuck you guys hard to decide

v/ bag i just didnt feel the standalone punch fresh executed as much as the nameplay and personal that bag did.

[miracle]

Fresh wins