Ransom Writers Chat

[Virbius]

Yeah Jack, that’s the first two lines. It’s an introduction too I suppose, writing it with a kind of implied performative aspect in mind as the first is supposed to imply a rapid breathless delivery and the second has an pseudo ad-lib after the rhyme.

[mal diction]

Gurt farmer accent down ere, innum?

I met one of the Wurzels down canal once, jus havin a looksee. Showed em a pikefish longer than yer arm and pleased as punch he were.

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[Jack Hallows]

Yeah Jack, that’s the first two lines. It’s an introduction too I suppose, writing it with a kind of implied performative aspect in mind as the first is supposed to imply a rapid breathless delivery and the second has an pseudo ad-lib after the rhyme.

i see now. damnit your rhyme style is frustrating man. it looks like there are 10 lines worth of rhymes there but when i copy & pasted the verse just now, i could kinda see how it was written. it just looks cramped in the thread. aight bet.