RW Wk1 - Jack Hallows vs Zqlkular

[Bag Mandela]

Ransom Writers Week 1 - Regular 6 Line Battle

6 lines each (doesn’t have to be set up-punch x3, you have creative freedom)

Bars due Tuesday 15th Oct
Public voting closes Wednesday 16th Oct

-Posting explanations / references below your bars is strongly recommended.
-State your accent in this first round then we’re good for the rest of the tourney.


2 impartial judges + public vote will decide the winner
MV’s vote = 1 vote
Bag's vote = 1 vote
Overall public vote = 1 vote
(Rebuttals, late drops & no shows are an instant loss)

@Jack Hallows @Zqlkular

[Jack Hallows]

present.

[Jack Hallows]

hmph.. could’ve sworn i checked in.

check.

[Zqlkular]

I’ll flood these flows like a thunderfuckin’ hurricane
Blow down the drones – my sunder-gusts be purely pain
Outside my eye – shit flies like origami cranes
Abandon coast – surge-tsunami overtows this game
Subside the tide – what’s left is woe and water-baned
Deride sublime – I decompose this rot defamed

Explicanda:

drones: double meaning – people who are mindlessly the same as well as the monotonous verse they produce.

overtows: play on “undertow”, which is a deadly current

eye: eye of a hurricane

origami cranes: can’t fly themselves and are weak debris in a hurricane

water-baned: compound adjective based on “bane” or ruin

[Jack Hallows]

bash u w/ a pool cue, watch this faggot fall over heaped
move some billiards over the corpse. i’m Draggin Balls over Z
i keep Trunks in my Frieza that make all future plans void
lined w/ Cell blockers that’ll absorb the signal from an Android
& speaking of absorption - Hallows vents confidence
that’s why ya Buu’s tryna absorb my essence by swallowin my chocolate
Howl.

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bunch of Dragon Ball Z references. Trunks, Frieza, Cell, Androids & Buu are all characters in the manga/anime.
pool cue death / billiards = pool table.
Trunks is from the future. Frieza = freezer. Frieza’s plans got cancelled when Trunks killed him. spoiler alert lol.
Cell is an Android that needs to absorb other Androids to become whole. in my freezer, the trunks are lined with electromagnetic/cellular blockers that will block/absorb Android cell phone signals making it impossible to call for help.
Buu = Boo/girlfriend. Buu is a demon who turns opponents into chocolate & eats them, absorbing characteristic of the victim to make himself more powerful. my confident essence is why his boo wants to ingest my long brown candy.

gdamn explaining the verse took longer than writing it.