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October 10th, 2024, 10:17 PM
#1
...is STONED
WK38: HMM: (RD2) jack Hallows vs Davedilly (OPEN FOR VOTES)
Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Jack Hallows
@daveDILLY
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October 10th, 2024, 11:26 PM
#2
Bladecoat Brawler
Re: WK38: HMM: (RD2) jack Hallows vs Davedilly
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October 12th, 2024, 06:16 AM
#3
Re: WK38: HMM: (RD2) jack Hallows vs Davedilly
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October 13th, 2024, 02:52 PM
#4
Re: WK38: HMM: (RD2) jack Hallows vs Davedilly
yo dis hoe scared! ima psycho killer - so u dont want 2go there..
my flows rare -
& the glock will put jack in a box if i pop up outta nowhere
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October 14th, 2024, 06:05 AM
#5
Bladecoat Brawler
Re: WK38: HMM: (RD2) jack Hallows vs Davedilly
dD…
this pred’ is incessant. he’s not of a respectable essence
the feds should arrest ‘im.. cuz big D behind baby d is his Initial sexual preference
Howl
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October 14th, 2024, 06:37 AM
#6
You've Earned a Custom Title!
Re: WK38: HMM: (RD2) jack Hallows vs Davedilly
Dave’s was solid but a bit predictable. Saw a Jack in the box line last week, although this one was well put together.
Jack was pretty great here, very creative. I like lines like that which take advantage of the format / only work as text.
Vote- Jack
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Re: WK38: HMM: (RD2) jack Hallows vs Davedilly (OPEN FOR VOTES)
Dave, written reasonably well and the punch obviously works but I've heard stacks of jack-in-the-box lines so it didn't have as much impact for me.
Jack, creative angle (by which I mean creating that angle from his initials, not simply the pedo thing) nice rhyming throughout & closed it out well. First time I've seen you battle & I rated it. Got the w convincingly.
Vote Jack Hallows
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